[Okay, that cry of pain immediately takes this from "simple fun" to "something's wrong." Neji's combat stance immediately drops and he's at her side in a quick stride, dropping to kneel in the snow.]
Tenten?
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[Okay, that cry of pain immediately takes this from "simple fun" to "something's wrong." Neji's combat stance immediately drops and he's at her side in a quick stride, dropping to kneel in the snow.]
Tenten?